misty71
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« on: June 15, 2003, 06:38:38 AM » |
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Hi again! I did a Dirty Harry Background a few months back, and I finally figured how to post it online (I know what youre thinking punk;youre thinking, is she slow or what?  ) I hope it works. Anyways, its not marvelous or anything, just tell em what you think, it took me a while to finish it, thats probably the only reason why I wanna show off my work  oh- just tell me if it doesnt work, and Ill delete the thread thanks- Here it goes-  I hope it doesnt disapear when I close the program 
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"I've never had a problem with drugs. I've had problems with the police." Keith Richards
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« Reply #2 on: June 15, 2003, 06:56:13 AM » |
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The artwork is pretty good, but the quote is off. Since you're using the "Do I feel lucky" quote from the end of the movie, here's how it goes: Ah-ah, I know what you're thinking, punk. You're thinking, "Did he fire six shots or only five?" And to tell you the truth, I've forgotten myself in all this excitement. But being this is a .44 Magnum - the most powerful handgun in the world and will blow your head clean off, you've got to ask yourself a question -- "Do I feel lucky?" Well, do ya, punk?! And the spelling for "excitement" is off. Sorry if I sound like I'm nitpicking... but if you can fix that up, it'll be even better. And for one more piece of constructive criticism... if you don't mind it... I'd take out the picture on the bottom left, since it doesn't really look good to have Harry standing on his own head, and lower the picture that remains a little. Sometimes, less is more. Keep it simple.  Otherwise, great job, Misty. 
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« Reply #3 on: June 15, 2003, 07:15:36 AM » |
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youre right about the quote, its wrong. Im not sure I can change it now, because I did that in paintbrush, and theres not really a way to change the font once its saved. Anyways, I didnt post it anywhere but here, so its not like someone will use it. lol, I know harry is satnding on his head, but I didnt have much place left,like on the bottom and the right side, where its just blue, thats where I put my icons so I didnt wanna clutter up that space.Its just that harrys legs are cut in that pic and I wanted to give it a "hes behind the other harry" kinda feel.  Anyways, thanks for pointing our those mistakes, youre right the quote is way off, its like a mix from the 2 "punk quotes" but I just did it without looking so.... 
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